Two Girls (Redone)

This picture is a remake of an old picture that I felt needed a refresh. I'm not perfectly content on the background but I suppose I'll figure out foliage eventually, and when I do, I'll share what I've learned.

This is the old picture, if you want to compare: 

I'm also working on a remake of this picture. Right now it's still in sketch form as drawing two people, especially when one is leading the other with her hand, is very tricky.